Tuesday, April 10, 2012

The End in Sight

Sooner or later, unless things are allowed trail off in an unsatisfactory manner that fails to resolve the central conflict, every story ends. It's the ultimate result of the protagonist's actions and should bring closure to the narrative. It's key for all writers to have a firm understanding of how they most effectively create, but even for those who just start writing and wait to see where the unfolding story takes them, my own opinion is that when it comes to writing a story, the single indispensable thing is a solid sense of how it is going to end.

It's not that you necessarily need a blueprint before you start writing; in my experience that's just needlessly constricting, though I imagine that there are some writers out there who use that sort of method successfully. It's important just to know roughly where you're going to end up before you start off; that way, elements like foreshadowing can be employed throughout the story, and the ending becomes a natural result of the story as it's unfolded. Personally, I need to know the general way my stories will end before I can start writing them - I need to have that destination, even if the route I'll take to get there is unclear. When I've written stories that fell apart or were abandoned, generally they were because I didn't know how I was going to end it when I started, and as a result my notion of the plot changed substantially through the course of the writing process - producing something that bent under pressure.

Whoever wrote Mass Effect 3 evidently did not follow anything remotely like this advice. Perhaps you've heard of the controversy that's been brewing since the game's release last month, the vociferous hatred of the game's endings among the fanbase that demonstrates the pitfalls inherent in a participatory narrative like the Mass Effect series. Encountering a weak ending in a book or movie is one thing; you had no role in the events as they unfolded, and in the end you only had to invest a few hours. In Mass Effect, which since its 2007 release was championed as something where your choices in one game would shape events in the next and where you could easily spend seventy-five hours guiding Commander Shepard from the opening scene to the final options, investment is vastly higher; it's more appropriate to say, I think, that players experience a participatory narrative, and as such there's a far greater necessity to provide a satisfactory conclusion.

It's somewhat understandable in its way - I can't think of any other series, offhand, that has been this audacious when it comes to an overarching participatory story. So it's not that much of a surprise, in retrospect, that Mass Effect 3 thoroughly fumbled the conclusion to such an extent that I swore at the system when the credits started rolling - and it wasn't even the whole conclusion, either. Just the last ten minutes.

Please note that there are SPOILERS AHEAD for the Mass Effect 3 ending, in the event that you still wish to experience it firsthand.

Also note spoilers for The Winter's Tale up there, for all those of you who are still waiting for tickets to the Globe Theatre.

Mass Effect follows your character, Commander Shepard, as he or she learns of and works to defeat the Reapers, a fleet of staggeringly ancient, incredibly powerful machines that pass through the galaxy every fifty thousand years and destroy all advanced civilizations, a cycle that has been continuing for tens of millions of years. Fundamentally, the story is about breaking the cycle of history; about doing the impossible, doing what's never been done before, surviving in the face of astronomical odds. In the third game, the Reapers arrive to annihilate civilization, while you work to unite the disparate species of the galaxy and complete a superweapon left in the archives that survived the previous cycle of destruction, in order to destroy the Reapers once and for all.

The final component in this weapon, a component you've been searching for throughout the game, is ultimately revealed to be something that's been present from the very beginning - the Citadel, an ancient, massive space station, the center of galactic society. You fight across the killing fields of London and ultimately, near-death, board the Citadel, dispatch the antagonist, and wait for the weapon to do its work...

...and then the starchild appears. Okay, it's an ancient AI resident in the Citadel, but it controls the Reapers. It recognizes that the cycle has been broken, and gives Shepard three different choices to end the game with. Different in what way? Well, in one choice the explosion is red, in one the explosion is blue, and in one the explosion is green. Those are the only fundamental differences between them, unless you didn't do enough sidequests and preparation, in which case all life on Earth is also annihilated.

The problem is that throughout the entire series, this starchild was barely even hinted at - from what I understand, there is one reference in the third game to something greater controlling the Reapers, but even that can be missed depending on which dialogue options you choose. What's more, it effectively invalidates the ending of the first game. My specific problems are that it's literally a deus ex machina resolution - BioWare did everything but animate the crane that the starchild was brought down on - and that the nature of the resolution is, in a setting that up until then was rather rigorous, purely Space Magic.

Even then, Space Magic isn't necessarily the problem. The problem is that at no point in the series was the existence of Space Magic hinted at. Imagine if the last episode of M*A*S*H had instead involved Athena appearing before Hawkeye in his tent and filling him with divine power, enabling him to send out a wave of peace and understanding across the world so that the soldiers would put down their weapons, the politicians would sign on the dotted line, and the Korean War would be over and everyone could go home. That'd be a pretty shitty ending, wouldn't it? Do you think a conclusion like that would have been remembered as fondly?

Mass Effect was planned as a trilogy from the very beginning - it's inexcusable that BioWare did not already know how it would be ending, and did not work toward that ending for the start. It should be a lesson to writers, both in participatory and non-participatory mediums, to not disregard the ending.

After all, once the story ends, that ending is what's freshest in the mind - it's what will stick with someone, and a hamfisted ending can sour even the most stellar storytelling.

Monday, April 9, 2012

Photo: The Developing Developments

All jokes aside, since coming out west I've found that it's difficult to get a bead on the city of Surrey. Depending on what I'm talking about at the time, it's easy to think of it as the Mississauga of the West or Vancouver's Scarborough or just the red-headed stepchild of the Lower Mainland, but it doesn't really fit into any convenient category; the juxtaposition of low-density suburbs, the wide-open countryside between the rivers, and its work-in-progress downtown come together to make a whole that isn't commonly encountered back east.

The Central City Tower - that bluish, sharp-roofed skyscraper in the photo down there - is, for the moment, one of the most obvious signs of this juxtaposition: the tallest building in Surrey, clearly visible poking above the treeline from New West, and yet surrounded by townhouses and apartment blocks and open fields awaiting redevelopment. With the recent completion of Surrey's new central library and the new city hall under construction on the former site of a strip mall, the place will no doubt look a lot different in ten or twenty years. For now, though, it seems almost awkwardly paused between the past and the future.


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Sunday, April 8, 2012

The Trouble with Twitter

It's a bit surprising, thinking about it, the presence that Twitter has taken in the professional and personal lives of so many people only six years after being launched; I suppose it's because I'm perpetually stuck in 2000, when dialup was how you got online and ICQ was how you talked to people once you got there. Imagine coordinating something like the Iranian election protests a couple of years back, or even something as minor as the #TellVicEverything thing from a little while ago, over point-to-point instant messaging. Twitter gives a level of basic engagement that, in some respects, is vastly elevated over what came before.

In some cases, perhaps too basic. On Friday the Toronto Star reported on the decision of NDP MP Charlie Angus - who I first heard of in his capacity as the NDP's digital affairs critic - to quit Twitter, which he described as "like being badgered by a drunk on a 24-hour bus ride." It's true that Twitter gives people a line to prominent figures - be they government, corporate, or celebrity - but what's also true as a result is that it gives people a line to each other, giving mute testimony that the world is not as we believe it to be.

I can understand why Angus left Twitter. As a politician, and especially an NDP politician at that, I can imagine that his timeline and Direct Message box must have always contained at least a significant minority of heinous shit in the form of received messages. It's life, without filters - and it's not the sort of thing that's restricted to political figures alone.

In the Star article, Susan Delacourt takes a rather optimistic view of Twitter, asking if people "are any nicer" in any given Tim Horton's than online, and that it "holds the potential to be a window into vast new worlds of politics." For the latter, I think it does, but not in the way a lot of us would hope; I would describe it more as a magnifying glass, throwing the quiet beliefs of a lot of people into unflattering sharpness. It's yet another demonstration of the Greater Internet Fuckwad Theory, or for you science majors, the online disinhibition effect - people who feel anonymous, who are at a remove from what they're saying and who they're speaking to, and who have an audience through use of a carefully-placed hashtag, will say things on Twitter that they would never say to a stranger in the real world.

Are people at Tim Horton's any nicer? Perhaps not, but the difference is that they'd at least act nicer. Someone in Tim Horton's who is, say, opposed to Earth Hour would probably be more circumspect about accusing its supporters as being "lunatics" who want to return civilization to the thirteenth century - which, I stress, is something that I honestly encountered - because if you pull out those kind of insane accusations in someone's face, you're running the risk of getting someone's fist in yours. As of yet, no one has invented a device that will allow you to stab people in the face over the Internet.

This is a problem that, honestly, I don't see being resolved any time soon. It's basic human nature, and from what I've seen too many humans are unwilling to climb above their basic natures. Nevertheless, in the end I think it's for the best that the internet has enabled conversations like this, and that politicians and so on should stick with it. If nothing else, it provides them with a far more honest appraisal of some of the people they are representing.

Saturday, April 7, 2012

Photo: Shining With the Sunset

It's easy to discount what'll happen when a building with an exterior made almost entirely of glass has the sunlight shine on it at just the right angle, since you also have to be at just the right angle to really appreciate it. I'm not sure which building that is a little to the left of the Scotia Tower, and I don't know if it would have appeared quite the same way to someone on the ground - but from Cambie and 10th, where this photo was taken from, the early Thursday evening Vancouver skyline was a hell of a thing.


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Friday, April 6, 2012

A Historical Perspective: Your License, Please

After the end of the Second World War, my grandfather Les Parkinson left the Royal Navy and settled down in Manchester, where he would serve as part of its police force until 1969. Many of the issues he encountered sixty years ago are just as relevant today; I don't know if they still use television detector vans to figure out who's not paying the BBC license fee, but from what I understand the basic structure is still the same.

Additionally, as a clarifying note - the £20 fine mentioned below may not seem too onerous to us, but after sixty years of inflation it'd more properly convert to around £440 today. Hardly something to sniff at.


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The war appeared to be a forgotten happening by the mid-1950s, but one in which a lot of lessons were learned. Big changes were being made in all walks of life. The policeman's lot, in particular, had been made happier with a nice pay increase and a change in uniform style. The old type of tunic had been replaced with an open-necked type, with which we wore a collar and tie, and we were issued with gabardine raincoats. At the same time, small forces were being gobbled up by the bigger ones, just as small towns were taken over by larger ones.

It appeared that everything was being modernized. Even the hitherto working class was fast becoming the middle class. Television was now available at a reasonable price, well within the range of the working man. There seemed to be an upsurge in the need to make life easier, and every house now seemed to have a refrigerator, a television set and now even a car. Though the latter was often an old banger, to me it was a good sign of the populace waking up and realizing that they too could have the things that were supposed to be the sign of the "upper class."

I bought a fridge. It was called an Iced Diamond. To accommodate it in the kitchen, I had to knock out a set of drawers and then purchase a fridge that fit the resultant space. It was about three feet square and four feet tall and barely fit in the only place I could use. The luxury of it, though, was worth it. No more sour milk or runny butter in the summer months. It made me wonder just how we had managed before we got it.

For years I fought off getting a television, for they were so expensive. Then rental companies started opening their doors, and I ended up renting one from a firm called Granada. At this time there were two channels, BBC and Granada. The latter was an independent station that got its revenue from the adverts it broadcasted. The BBC was a corporation and received its income from the licence fees one had to pay. Licences were issued by the General Post Office.

At this time the whole licence structure was silly. One had to have separate licences for the radio in the house, the radio in the car, the black and white television and finally for the colour television. The licence fees went to the BBC, which did not use advertising. If one had a television that was only able to receive independent broadcasts, though, one still had to buy the licence for the BBC. It was so stupid.

The television I got was a huge box with a nineteen-inch screen and a black and white display. I was in court one day when a fellow was up for not having a licence for his television. He was fined twenty pounds and the television was confiscated. That made me think, for I didn't have a licence.

The GPO had special detecting vehicles driving around the area. They were able to pinpoint a television in use, and from their records they were able to tell whether you had a licence or not. In the court, I learned that the shopkeeper had to fill in a form each time a television was purchased, and that was how the GPO was able to maintain its records. Anyway, I decided to get a licence.

As I was walking home that day the GPO van passed me. I realized that that bugger was going to go to my house, and sure enough he stopped and went to the house. As I got to the gate the GPO man was talking to Wyn.

"Oh, here's my husband now," I heard her say. "He can tell you what you want to know."

The GPO man asked me if I had a television set in the house, so I took him to see it. Then he asked if I had a licence, so I showed him the date-stamped one I had bought that morning. He then apologized for bothering me and left. I was lucky again, thanks to that little fellow perched on my shoulder.

Past Perspectives:

Thursday, April 5, 2012

Photo: Sunburst over Waterfront Station

There's not much to this phtoo that isn't immediately obvious - it's downtown Vancouver, specifically Waterfront Station and the immediate vicinity, seen from Granville Square, on one of those rare blue sky days. I just like the look of it, and the way the lens flares managed to get in.


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Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Earth Hour Needs a New Approach

No matter how well thought out something may be when it's first introduced to the world at large, and no matter how popular something might be at the moment of its rollout, the simple fact is that if something sticks around for long enough a majority of people are eventually going to sour on it. It happened to disco, it happened to the Liberal Party of Canada, and I feel like it's in the process of happening now with Earth Hour.

That's not to say it's falling apart already. The City of New Westminster announced yesterday that power consumption dropped by 2.19%, above the provincial average of 1.67% - and though Toronto experienced a 6.8% drop, it was significantly less than the reductions in 2009 and 2010. People worldwide continue to mark the hour, don't get me wrong - still, it feels like the opposition - represented mostly by the Human Achievement Hour "turn everything ON" crowd - may be starting to get more traction.

Sure, at its core Earth Hour is just a gesture, and depending on where you live it might not even make a difference whether you turn your stuff on; most of BC's electricity is generated by renewable sources already. I'll admit that there are problems with it - in addition to "turn off your lights for an hour" literally being the least we can do, it also provides an angle of attack for people who are predisposed to oppose these sort of initiatives anyway. I'd rather have an environmental initiative that didn't lend itself to claims that its backers want to return the world to a medieval lifestyle.

So in that respect, isn't it time to reinvent Earth Hour? People who haven't been reached by it yet probably won't be - I think it's time to take a different tack, to use it to pursue environmental awareness and conservation from another direction.

One that recognizes that the Lower Mainland actually does experience subzero conditions and snowfall.

I've asked around since arriving in British Columbia, and the consensus is clear - at least in the Lower Mainland, when it comes to residential buildings the insulation is shit. I can tell when it's a windy day outside by the way my blinds move in the breeze, even with the window shut. Sure, it's not the first time I've dealt with a poorly-insulated apartment; during my student days in Peterborough, I bedded down in one that was effectively uninhabitable in the winter without space heaters. It may have only got down to 4 or 5 degrees last week while I was keeping my heat off, and even though water doesn't freeze it's still damn cold.

“I’m very proud of our results this year... I look forward to us doing even better in the years to come," New Westminster mayor Wayne Wright said in regard to the city's Earth Hour performance. What I'd rather see is New Westminster becoming an example for lowered energy consumption throughout the year, without the need to turn off lights for an hour. If there's really such interest in environmental initiatives, why not establish a program where the city will provide financial support for residential insulation projects? If it's energy we're concerned about saving, let's fix up our apartments and our houses so that the heat we're pumping out of the radiators doesn't just slip right out the window.

Something like that might well give us more than a 2.19% drop, all on its own.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Photo: Dark Clouds Over North Vancouver

There's something about the early evening, when the sun is still in the sky but illuminating things on the ground at practically a ninety-degree angle, that can make for compelling photographs; some parts of the immediate world are lit up like it's still the middle of the day, while others are already living in shadow. This shot, looking across Burrard Inlet, was taken a little after 7 PM, and though the cranes at the port are bright as traffic cones the mountains are already dark.


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Monday, April 2, 2012

An Hour for Understanding

On Saturday I was watching the #EarthHour hashtag on Twitter as 8:30 ticked through Mountain Time, and I'll be blunt--I was demoralized by a lot of what I saw. Sure, there were people tweeting about how they were going to participate... but there were also people shooting from the hip about "hippies," about how if you want to find anyone marking Earth Hour, you just need to look for a pulled-over Prius with its passengers shivering in the dark, and plenty of people bragging about how they were turning everything on.

I can understand someone who thinks it's a meaningless gesture on their part and just doesn't participate; my own participation, while I was off for a walk around New Westminster, means that the demand on British Columbia's grid dropped by maybe 0.1 kilowatt-hours. What I have more difficulty understanding is the the thought process of someone who luxuriates in their non-participation, or goes the whole Ezra Levant route and turns on everything in their house just because they can. Is it just spite? It's not the sort of action that makes sense to me, in that case; when I set out to spite Ezra Levant in response to his Human Achievement Hour bull, I turned my heat off - which not only made me less comfortable, but saved energy and, thus, money. When people turn on all their stuff during Earth Hour, what is it? "I'll show you to turn off all your lights! I'll turn on all the things that make me more comfortable, and in so doing jack up my hydro bill!"

A lack of understanding is something that irritates me, so I tried to engage. I asked questions. I didn't swear, I didn't insult... but that didn't stop some dude, when asked why we shouldn't give a shit if George Carlin was right and it was just us that needed to be saved and not the planet, from answering that I'm "nuts" and "want us living in the 13th century."

I don't know how to respond to something that's as far out there as that statement. How do you have a meaningful conversation with someone who's so rooted in their position that their answer to a question (in the interests of transparency, my question was "Oh, so if it's only us that are going to go somewhere, it... isn't our problem? Seriously?") is a personal attack? How do you engage with someone who refuses to even entertain the basic premises of your argument?

A streetlight in downtown New Westminster.

I can remember a time when I hadn't yet come to a conclusion about the issues of climate change - back around 2002 and 2003, almost a sort of never-never-land now, when there were reports of "global warming" on Mars and before summer Arctic ice losses really started getting in gear, and before the Fear, Uncertainty, and Doubt machine really started to spew in earnest. What didn't happen was this - I didn't find a position and then weld my boots to it. As evidence continued to pile up, and I learned about things like ocean acidification that I'd never heard of before, things shifted.

When it comes to a person who shoots first and answers questions later, then... where are they? What led them to the spot where they're standing, and why do they keep standing there? I know for a fact that some people believe, just as I theorized, that it's "arrogant" to suggest that humans can influence the climate, but that comes down to the nature of how well one understands the effect that human civilization has on Earth. But that can't be all of it. So what is it, then? Is it fear? Are some people really so terrified of shadows that something like this is enough to set them off, that something as innocuous as Earth Hour means that the black helicopters will soon be landing?

It's difficult, it really is. Sometimes I feel like it's 1983 and I'm arguing with people who think that TTAPS is full of shit and the idea of nuclear winter is a Communist hoax meant to make the West eliminate its nuclear stockpile so that the Reds can roll over us. I mean, it's no less ridiculous than the idea that that climate change is a hoax set up by scientists to get grant money, or that it's not anthropogenic so we don't need to give a shit about what happens. These are fundamentally stupid ideas that have as much backing as the notion that our prominent political and cultural leaders are actually twelve-foot-tall blood-drinking reptilian aliens in disguise.

Maybe it would be better if they were aliens, after all--that, at least, would mean that they've probably dealt with this sort of situation before, and have some idea of how to address it.

Sunday, April 1, 2012

Photo: A Blur of Light, A Flash of Color

Last night I took a walk around New Westminster to see what was what. The SkyBridge, considering the size of its towers and the threat they could pose to low-flying aircraft, was lit up like it always is and SkyTrains whispered back and forth through the chilled spring air. To take this shot, I used a one-second exposure... and seeing as how I completely lack a tripod, I'm pleased that it's as stable as it is.


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